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sian. today i think i flunk my english. is it possible to just have 2 reason supporting the stand and just 1 puny one going against? i am so dead. so this is how it goes.. at least for the intro..

Upon mentioning the words "good parenting", more often than not, images of parents cuddling their babies and proving warmth and blablabla are often conjured up in our minds... wad pillars of support.. oh shit i crapped. wad decided to make life-long committments since we were born. emotional support. wad nuture future generation.

nex para. good partenting in terms of the emotional support blablabla. wad statistics show most criminal from broken wadever and wad juvenile crips. provide emotional support. an outlet of stress blablabla. turn to parents instead of resorting to taking drugs blablabla.

nex para. good parenting in terms of providing a conducive env to grop up in. and i quote how we are affected by our env. then wad girl stranded in a jungle then raised by wolves then when discovered, had wolf like characteristics to prove my point. [wanted to use lupine, but nt sure if there is such a word]. tyhen wad smokers and alcoholics then children likely to grow up to be like blablabla. then broken families the childrens own families also broken. then positive. wad civilised adults responsible wadever shit..

then say why cannot. wad human nature to make mistakes. wad greed. wad curiosity wad urge to feel the adrenalin rush when u steal something blablabla. then say education together with good paretning...

finally say wadever shit plus education can help reduce societal prob but not eliminate them. say wad as long as we live there will be this problem unless we live in a utopian society...

SUCKS RIGHT? dead. annie tan is gonna say, "i am disappointed", just liek wad she said to joce. AHHH! my section 2 was not good. ok it was ok. but i din know wad a time line was. so i lfet it out. language is ok. but haix. ok paper2 was ver straight forward. maybe a bit too straight forward. i am dead here too. ahh. b3 for eng... sian. ok now i'll go to ss. diplomacy and deterrence....